Audience Feedback of Final Product

“I think it’s great, I like the way you used the same colour scheme throughout.” – Emma Harrison, 16

“I don’t like the picture that’s on the front cover, I think it would be better if there was a picture of someone performing.” – Jane, 13

“It looks good, but I think to improve you should include things for older people too.” – Avril, 40s

“I like it, but I wouldn’t buy it because it’s too expensive.” – Lesley, 40

“It’s not my kind of music, so I wouldn’t buy it, but it looks great.” – Kyle, 17

Audience Feedback of Final Draft

"Put a frame around all the pictures in you article, to create a better sense of cohesion - use a polaroid frame, wooden frame, or drawing pin graphic."

"I think you should change the picture on the top left of the front cover, because it's someone's back so it's not very accessible on the cover."

"I don't think you need the second part of the introduction to the article, the first bit and the title is enough."

"You need more pictures on the contents page, there's not enough variety, because it's the same articles as on the cover."

"Move the editor's letter to the top of the page."