Audience Feedback of Final Draft

"Put a frame around all the pictures in you article, to create a better sense of cohesion - use a polaroid frame, wooden frame, or drawing pin graphic."

"I think you should change the picture on the top left of the front cover, because it's someone's back so it's not very accessible on the cover."

"I don't think you need the second part of the introduction to the article, the first bit and the title is enough."

"You need more pictures on the contents page, there's not enough variety, because it's the same articles as on the cover."

"Move the editor's letter to the top of the page."